I am naked I am free In light of you I am hidden I am trapped Because of you Where does that leave me? In a world that can't see me?
Hi Autumn's Angel, Don't let someone else define you. Let the world see YOU. Your poem is a good start. Relationships can be either nurturing or not. The first three lines seem to be a positive experience for you. And on the flip side, the next three lines seem to be saying you are losing yourself by being with him. That the love you have for him, you would do anything to keep him? Unfortunately this is the quickest way to lose him. Give each other some space. Develop interests separate from him. Show him you are your own person and can do things on your own, and when the two of you choose to be together, then it will be mutually nurturing. sugarplumplum
I am naked I am free In the reflection of you Thank you I'm illuminated I'm released In remembrance of you Thank you Where that leaves me.. or whether the world can see me Is now insignificant to me Because I know in another life You and me will be
