A song I wrote.

Discussion in 'Art' started by Sweetleaf63, Jun 4, 2010.

  1. Sweetleaf63

    Sweetleaf63 Senior Member

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    Pain
    Pain over here pain over there
    Pain in my heart pain in my soul
    Pain in my mind

    Pain
    Locked in chains
    Pain
    blown out vains

    This pain is for you
    Many things I believe for you is pain
    I don't want any pain from you but I accepted your pain
    I'll take the pain from you forever

    This pain is everything painful has it is
    ready for everything is to be done for you
    I'll be ready for everyone's pain
    Every shadows of darkness is there inside of me
    tearing me apart to learn from you .
     
  2. The Imaginary Being

    The Imaginary Being PAIN IN ASS Lifetime Supporter

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    soo..

    you're in pain then?? :D


    It's really cool, nice one! :)
     
  3. Sweetleaf63

    Sweetleaf63 Senior Member

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    These words didn't just come out with no feelings.:) Thanks!
     
  4. armed_with_a_mind

    armed_with_a_mind Member

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    *I smiled
    good write babe
    :)
     
  5. Sweetleaf63

    Sweetleaf63 Senior Member

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    thanks sugar booger!:D
     
  6. ThreeEyedChild

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    Sorry, i don't like it.
    Sounds like every other teenage girl's mediocre english-class work...
     
  7. Sweetleaf63

    Sweetleaf63 Senior Member

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    wasn't suppose to sound any smart. I wrote my feeling down
     

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