I sense you.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MelzDope, Jun 19, 2010.

  1. MelzDope

    MelzDope Member

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    In the crisp breeze that gives my body a chill,
    or the cool breath of air that I slowly inhale?
    It relaxes me, I then exhale;
    Releasing just the worries that cause my heart to race,
    gradually changing to a slower pace.
    'Cause in my mind, the absence of your presence is now vanished,
    there lays a permanent place in my heart, which belongs to you,
    and it cannot be banished.
    I'm struck with admiration and curiosity,
    deaf by thought; my heart begins beating again at a quicker velocity.
    Only until the same cool wind flirts with my nose,
    it puts me in a trance where I'm robbed of thought, so my ideas won't be exposed.
    But now, now I'm envisioning something different that only my mind can see,
    I'm imagining you in that divine place with me.
    And I'm mesmerized, but I'm captivated, as well, in pure serenity,
    I know you're with me through your intangible identity.
     
  2. Jolie Dawson

    Jolie Dawson Member

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    This is fantastic; you're very talanted. :D
    I'm too shy to share my work.... :D
     
  3. MelzDope

    MelzDope Member

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    Thank you. I really appreciate it. Don't ever be too shy to share your work. Be proud of your words. Even if it touches one person, you know you're doing something right.
     

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