All I can do is laugh, my choices, my life, What have I done? What haven't I? My own self, nemesis The demon claws at my feet, Grinning, Terrible, Constant, My reflection peering up
This is a good poem about self-loathing...something I have done and written about for many years. It's short and to the point, I like it. Maybe next time use fresher words and images to go with it.
