Shifting and swirling All around The smoke thick and bitter lingering slightly above the ground i tilt my head i light the pipe i breath in deeply i dont feel allright the smoke hits the back of my chest my heart starts racing my minds a mess intoxication can be such sweet bliss but sobriety is free and this is expensive shit....
damn, you are good. nice flow and i felt the pacing was perfect. basic and unsophisticated but in control.
thank you for your kind words, some hae said i have i have a natual talent for poetry. but i just dont see it. but aslong as people are enjoying my writings i will try to post more
