The only problem I see Is it sounds like the poems I used to write in intermediate english. Learn to use allegory and symbolism your writing will be much more interesting
hahaha I don't really care what any of you think of my poem. The one I posted in this thread got my feelings across and said what it was meant to say, and that's all I needed it to do, whether it sounds good or not. The other one that I posted in the stoners' lounge is admittedly lame but, again, it gets the point across. Regardless of what any of you thought of it, thanks for reading it and thanks for the feedback. lol I wasn't feeling too bad when I posted it anyway, as I was pretty full of xanax and just felt like sharing. haha Carry on:sifone:
I've had great success with a combination of st john's wort, exercise and good food, making new friends and staying very active, along with a constant shift in mindset. Obviously with depression no-one wants to do these things, but just force it and know everything's alright. :coffee: