Dying

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by danielleinthesky, Sep 17, 2010.

  1. danielleinthesky

    danielleinthesky Member

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    Tragedy tearing at my weakened flesh and bones,
    As my entrails are spilling into a pile of unknown.
    Hands pulling at my hair with eyes looking towards the sky.
    I scream in bloody murder, repeating, asking, "why?"
    Feel life leaving my body as i begin to shake.
    The earth rumbles all around me as my legs begin to break.
    Painful and aggressive all these feelings are unleashed.
    A new level of insanity has finally been reached.
    Decaying corpse spread all around me and i cant help but stare,
    At the pieces of my body as i linger in the air.
    Ghostly presence of my soul, haunting no one but myself.
    Trapped inside this world where i hold no greater wealth.
    Passing on wasnt the hard part, it's the uncertainty of after.
    Where do you go, what do you do, what is it like, a whole new chapter
     
  2. guerillabedlam

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    Intense, it flows very well too. Good work!
     
  3. thedope

    thedope glad attention Lifetime Supporter

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    How hard is it to read a book, this new chapter.
     
  4. angel_of_hate

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    Very nice
     
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