"Contradiction"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by angel_of_hate, Sep 25, 2010.

  1. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    CONTRADICTION


    words spoke in silence
    thoughts heard aloud
    tomorrow begins yesterday
    a future falling down​


    victimized but stable
    tainting the untouched
    stones shedding tears
    because hearts went unloved​


    proud to be a failure
    the saddest soul to smile
    obligated to nothing
    secure in my denial​


    together we're apart
    in this fake reality
    bound to unlocked chains
    an obvious conspiracy​


    broken hearts that beat
    and veins running dry
    immune to whats killing
    each and every life​


    abrasivly gentle
    bitterly sweet
    happily hating
    a successful defeat​


    sometimes but not always
    we try without trying
    to ignore what we see, but
    the truth keeps on lying​


    alone in this kaos
    sleeping wide awake
    stressful bliss beckones
    to see how much i can take​

     
    in danger of not knowing
    where the end begins
    bearing countless lossess
    are those who actually win​


    pleasure holding pain
    wrong becoming right
    miserably content suffering
    in this contradicting life​

    Copyright (C) Angel Campbell​
     
  2. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    WOW. I loved it.

    I complete understand where you are coming from, and I felt that way through much of my teen years.

    Unfortunately, I think I liked it too much to offer any constructive critique :) maybe another day :p
     
  3. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    haha .. thanx for takin the time to read my work =)
     
  4. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    I like the ironic opposites throughout...oxymorons?
     
  5. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    yep .. suppose to be a world of opposition we have grown acustom to
     
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