How to create an enemy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by High Plaines Drifter, Nov 9, 2010.

  1. High Plaines Drifter

    High Plaines Drifter Member

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    Start with an empty canvas
    Sketch in broad outline the forms of
    men, women, and children.

    Dip into the well of your own
    disowned darkness
    with a wide brush and
    stain the strangers with the sinister hue
    of the shadow.

    Trace onto the face of the enemy the greed,
    hatred, carelessness you dare not claim as
    your own.

    Obscure the sweet individuality of each face.

    Erase all hints of the myriad loves, hopes,
    fears that play through the kaleidoscope of
    every finite heart.

    Twist the smile until it forms the downward
    arc of cruelty.

    Strip flesh from bone until only the
    abstract skeleton of death remains.

    Exaggerate each feature until man is
    metamorphasized into beast, vermin, insect.

    Fill in the background with malignant
    figures from ancient nightmares - devils
    demons, myrmidons of evil.

    When your icon of the enemy is complete
    you will be able to kill without guilt,
    slaughter without shame.

    The thing you destroy will have become
    merely an enemy of God, an impediment
    to the sacred dialectic of history.
     
  2. Zorba The Grape

    Zorba The Grape Gavagai?

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    That's a very interesting piece of work. A lot of very good lines.
     
  3. worldsofdarkblue

    worldsofdarkblue Banned

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    Then what?
     
  4. rollingalong

    rollingalong Banned

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    this line blew me away
    ''Twist the smile until it forms the downward
    arc of cruelty.''


    thank you from someone that usually can not appreciate poetry
     
  5. ci0616

    ci0616 Banned

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    Good work! I hope you're not making too many enemies though!
     
  6. High Plaines Drifter

    High Plaines Drifter Member

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    Im considering getting this tattoed on my upper thigh where it would only be seen if I'm naked, by someone whom I'm getting intimate with.
     
  7. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    your words create a vivid picture and the actuall picture is flippin awesome haha .. i was hoping there was sum artwork to go with this poem .. very nice
     
  8. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    fucking sick as fuck, man. Great job!
     
  9. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    Great, but don't brand yourself with it! :)

    Or if you are determined, do just this bit:

     

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