Broken highway

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Free as a bird, Dec 2, 2004.

  1. Free as a bird

    Free as a bird Member

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    BrokenHighway
    Once upon a time,
    Upon a lonely hill
    Where yesterday's tommorrow,
    and Time is standing still.
    There Lived a broken highway,
    where broken dreams reside,
    they sing their paiful memories
    and swim through tears they cried.

    Upon this hill of shadows,
    their lived a little boy,
    He lived his life in poverty,
    never tasting joy.
    His mother was a junkie,
    His father he'd never cross
    Now he'll play among the angels
    and splash in pools of loss.

    Now up on Death Row avenue,
    A man sits with his child,
    Hes paying for his individuality,
    his fears are running wild.
    he looks down at his namesake,
    a tiny boy of seven,
    'perhaps we'll meet again my son,
    we'll sing again, in heaven'

    Around on Bullshit avenue,
    He stuffs his hands with greed,
    and never bears a thought for those
    whos lives shall never lead.
    He smiles a smile of hatred
    and blinks away the guilt,
    he epitomises what our world stands for,
    The Hatred on which its built.
     
  2. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    wow... I love this. It's sad, and lonley, and true...yet beautiful and strong. It's a story about a life of learning to understand hate...and to get along with it. Nice poem. I really liked it. Full of energy.
    If you play, you should set this to music...you could make a great song.

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    peace& <3
     
  3. StickyPoohy

    StickyPoohy Member

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    ...and could just as easily be about the point we've reached in our evolution! ...and all of those things!!
    Great poem, though!


    S.
     
  4. Free as a bird

    Free as a bird Member

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    Glad you liked it guys you're both right about its subject matter. I do play guitar and harminica and sing but man its hard to put it to music
     

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