"Artifical Paradise"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by angel_of_hate, Nov 16, 2010.

  1. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    ARTIFICAL PARADISE


    No broken promises to erase
    Or heartaches to mend
    Where tears are shed in happiness
    Between lovers and friends


    A world of non-existing pain
    Where greed gives way to unity
    And competition lacks participants
    To devour this nations equality


    A life where jobs paid the same
    And nobody was poor
    Slowly developing humanitarism
    Helping nature to restore


    Where good deeds become contagious
    And everyone wants to help
    When people finally realize
    That others also count


    No more bullshit running rampant
    To clog the veins of life
    To bad it’s just a dream
    Of an artificial paradise

    Copyright (C) Angel Campbell

    :devil:
     
  2. Rainbowflower

    Rainbowflower Member

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    That is an awesome poem!
     
  3. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    thank you bunches rainbowflower!!
     
  4. OneLifeForm

    OneLifeForm Member

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    That is indeed a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing :)
     
  5. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    =) .. thanx for reading and responding!!
     
  6. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    wow AOH, this one hits the strings of life.

    this is my favorite by you!
     
  7. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    thanx rambleON .. i love to write thought-provoking poems
     
  8. Monkey Boy

    Monkey Boy Senior Member

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    Thought provoking.[​IMG]
     

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