sleeping Giants

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rambleON, Dec 9, 2010.

  1. rambleON

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    As a kid I had thoughts
    about sleeping giants
    and thick green leafy stalks

    I wondered a lot too
    as a teenager kid
    thought maybe, perhaps I
    could climb atop one too
    wake them up, to talk things
    ask them knowledge and such
    how they felt about me
    becoming a giant too

    as a grown up big kid
    I gave up and walked
    off to safer places
    and that was that, of course
    I was too old to dream

    as a very old kid
    my walking cane agreed
    until the clouds parted
    and out came two pillars
    of heavy nimbleness
    up I went to a court
    of rumbling giants

    they were the sleeping greats
    so I thought at least then
    the truth, they soon told me
    was that I slept on them
     
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    It's an idea that has been covered before. That said, I like it a lot. Very good work. Keep em comming!
     
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    What idea ?
     
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