I need a poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ChronicTom, Dec 20, 2010.

  1. ChronicTom

    ChronicTom Banned

    Messages:
    6,640
    Likes Received:
    14
    Something about winter solstice, the return of the sun, brighter days ahead type of thing...

    Something that doesnt mention god or angels or such religious... stuff...
     
  2. Sam_Stoned

    Sam_Stoned Senior Member

    Messages:
    3,384
    Likes Received:
    10
    I was 16 give me a break :p
     
  3. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

    Messages:
    4,690
    Likes Received:
    45
    I got other verses and projects going on but I like you C. Tom. I'll pm you a poem. I'm not the best but I like to write so maybe others well help you out as well...

    when do you need it and why to you need it, if you don't mind.
     
  4. Meliai

    Meliai Members

    Messages:
    867
    Likes Received:
    4
    To Winter By William Blake

    `O Winter! bar thine adamantine doors:
    The north is thine; there hast thou built thy dark
    Deep-founded habitation. Shake not thy roofs,
    Nor bend thy pillars with thine iron car.'
    He hears me not, but o'er the yawning deep
    Rides heavy; his storms are unchain'd, sheathèd
    In ribbèd steel; I dare not lift mine eyes,
    For he hath rear'd his sceptre o'er the world.

    Lo! now the direful monster, whose skin clings
    To his strong bones, strides o'er the groaning rocks:
    He withers all in silence, and in his hand
    Unclothes the earth, and freezes up frail life.

    He takes his seat upon the cliffs,--the mariner
    Cries in vain. Poor little wretch, that deal'st
    With storms!--till heaven smiles, and the monster
    Is driv'n yelling to his caves beneath mount Hecla.


    not sure if thats quite what you're looking for. i dig some william blake.
     
  5. The Imaginary Being

    The Imaginary Being PAIN IN ASS Lifetime Supporter

    Messages:
    11,770
    Likes Received:
    145
    "The sun has got his hat on
    Hip-hip-hip-hooray!
    The sun has got his hat on
    And he's coming out today!"
     
  6. ChronicTom

    ChronicTom Banned

    Messages:
    6,640
    Likes Received:
    14
    I want something to be able to write in cards sort of thing that is about the about the soltice... that is cheery and bright (which pretty much kills blake.. lol), something that is in plain modern english.

    The winter solstice marks the shortest day of the year. From that point on, each day gets brighter and longer, returning warmth and life to the world. That is the part of this time of year that should be celebrated and shared.

    I needed it yesterday... lol It couldn't ever be too late though as I am looking for something that will become a part of our holiday traditions here. However, our dinner this year is happening wednesday evening.
     
  7. The Imaginary Being

    The Imaginary Being PAIN IN ASS Lifetime Supporter

    Messages:
    11,770
    Likes Received:
    145
    I was wondering why you needed something like this.
     
  8. Sam_Stoned

    Sam_Stoned Senior Member

    Messages:
    3,384
    Likes Received:
    10
    My silver skies line is good for that I think...
     
  9. deleted

    deleted Visitor

    Thy shadow, Earth, from Pole to Central Sea,
    Now steals along upon the Moon's meek shine
    In even monochrome and curving line
    Of imperturbable serenity.

    How shall I link such sun-cast symmetry
    With the torn troubled form I know as thine,
    That profile, placid as a brow divine,
    With continents of moil and misery?

    And can immense Mortality but throw
    So small a shade, and Heaven's high human scheme
    Be hemmed within the coasts yon arc implies?

    Is such the stellar gauge of earthly show,
    Nation at war with nation, brains that teem,
    Heroes, and women fairer than the skies?

    By Thomas Hardy (1840-1928)
     
  10. Monkey Boy

    Monkey Boy Senior Member

    Messages:
    6,908
    Likes Received:
    392
    The dark of winter wraps around us tight.
    The lamps are fired, and flickering light
    beats time to the fiddle as notes float softly down, like the years' first snow.
    While outside the window a blast of late December wind
    whistles harmony to the drone of the pipes.
    We push the old year back against the wall
    so we can dance a jig for Christmas and welcome in the new
     
  11. ChronicTom

    ChronicTom Banned

    Messages:
    6,640
    Likes Received:
    14
    the word christmas (and the celebration) is a part of that religious.... stuff... I was referring to not being included...
     
  12. Monkey Boy

    Monkey Boy Senior Member

    Messages:
    6,908
    Likes Received:
    392
    I was looking for one that was short and simple while still being bright and cheery, but that''s hard to find when it's talking about the darkest/shortest day of the year you know?...lol. Here's one ....

    Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Whose woods these are I think I know.
    His house is in the village though;
    He will not see me stopping here
    To watch his woods fill up with snow.
    My little horse must think it queer
    To stop without a farmhouse near
    Between the woods and frozen lake
    The darkest evening of the year.
    He gives his harness bells a shake
    To ask if there is some mistake.
    The only other sound’s the sweep
    Of easy wind and downy flake.
    The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
    But I have promises to keep,
    And miles to go before I sleep,
    And miles to go before I sleep.

    Robert Frost
     
  13. Reviewer

    Reviewer Guest

    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
    She’s powerful and quiet,
    Slipping over the horizon,
    Providing consciousness,
    Moving so slowly we measure her in hours and days.
    We know her for a lifetime
    While forgetting her in the nightly solace of mortals;
    Colored dreams of the day’s events dissolve into the saccharine darkness.
    It’s in darkness we reminisce,
    Fall victim to our notions
    And dream the mortals’ dream.


    -From The Whippoorwill's Song by C. B. Carter
     
  14. ChronicTom

    ChronicTom Banned

    Messages:
    6,640
    Likes Received:
    14
    I really like that, but not for this...

    I had someone mention to me the other day that they thought it was odd that I would celebrate the darkest day of the year.... It isn't about that...

    It is about the rebirth of light in the days of the harshest of winter. There may be more snow and colder weather yet to come, but the light itself (hence the promise of spring) is greater each day...
     
  15. rollingalong

    rollingalong Banned

    Messages:
    33,587
    Likes Received:
    11,008
    soltice here
    winter fear
    heres my dear
    to interfere
    now get me a beer
     
  16. Justin_Hale

    Justin_Hale ( •_•)⌐■-■ ...(⌐■_■)

    Messages:
    4,080
    Likes Received:
    362
    “O light! This is the cry of all the characters of ancient drama brought face to face with their fate. This last resort was ours, too, and I knew it now. In the depths of winter I finally learned there was in me an invincible summer.” ~Albert Camus


    Edit: This was a quote, but I thought it sounded cool.
     
  17. OneLifeForm

    OneLifeForm Member

    Messages:
    833
    Likes Received:
    1
    This is fantastic.
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice