Ignorant Bliss

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Dec 22, 2010.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    Describe me the pleasures of ignorant bliss,
    When life's like a train you are bound to miss,
    When casual trifles appear in pink,
    And wonders untouchable instantly shrink.

    You don't want to alter reality frail,
    So every bold thought finds itself in a jail.
    You welcome no changes, you try just to match
    The role you play, fate's satirical sketch.

    You say you don't mind it, I know its false,
    Your day, like a wheel, monotonously rolls.
    You suffer to fit an invisible hole
    That life cast you into. To fight or to crawl?
     
  2. mrs_hendrix

    mrs_hendrix Member

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    Ha, wow. Did you write that for me?
    I like it, it's honest and quite forward. It makes me feel like I'm being scolded, but in not in a negative way at all. Good work
     
  3. BrootalHankie

    BrootalHankie Member

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    Thats really deep. I love this. <3
     
  4. angel_of_hate

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    very well put .. very well written
     

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