Forgotten love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BrootalHankie, Jan 9, 2011.

  1. BrootalHankie

    BrootalHankie Member

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    Forgotten Love.


    Forgotton love, forget not the night.
    Nor the shadows, and not by slight;
    The upbringing of this damnnation,
    which has come upon us, through reckless creation.

    Forgotten love, Hang upon the hold of doom
    How treatening, the end had come too soon.
    Pondering the work of doubt?
    And how close our finish, to an unheard shout.

    Forgotten love, Sleep well into wake,
    For remembering the untold slumber,
    We would remain then far too late.
    Hence then no worry about an unclean break.

    Forgotten love, Leave no trace,
    Of the memories made in such a afflicted place,
    Think not of unwanted hesitation,
    Caused by long deflated times of elevation.

    Forgotten love, will you charish no other,
    A love not unlike a wound;
    No cure, can't recover.
    Slowly and gradually,
    You grasp the hurt of mortality.

    Forgotten love, because I cannot remember
    A time, a place, more of a forbidden splendor.
    And if you were to come to mind,
    I wouldn't mind, or would I just bind myself
    Now, just to think of someone else?

    Forgotten love, as it is a contradiction.
    Loving now, live by mere prediction.
    But in the back of my head,
    Just, reminding me of us, my eyes rimmed in red.
    But today, im okay. Another in my bed.


    By: BrootalHankie.

    I like to write.. just wondering what everyone
    may think of my poetry. :)
     
  2. metalguitarist420

    metalguitarist420 Member

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    It was really nice, babe. You're really talented. I'm glad you're mine. :) I love you.
     
  3. BrootalHankie

    BrootalHankie Member

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    Thank you!
    And I love you too,
    Mr. 420. :love:
     
  4. Culdeemoon

    Culdeemoon Member

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    Very profound and heartfelt... It's like something Stevie Nicks' might sing (abbreviated)!
     
  5. BrootalHankie

    BrootalHankie Member

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    Thats quite a complement, thanks Culdeemoon. :)
     
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