Half and Half

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Lilith Sunrise, Jan 26, 2011.

  1. Lilith Sunrise

    Lilith Sunrise Guest

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    Half and Half
    She stares into a reflection
    a portrait of her mother and mother before.
    Silly sides smile.
    One blue eye.
    Half perfect.
    But tonight he says its you girl and she knows
    yes only she knows.
    Bare to the bone,a zipper heart.
    He wants her she says he wants me
    and he remembers my name now.
    Could I mean as much without his penetration?
    Would he still be there in the morning even if I burn the biscuits?
    She is calling his name and playing into his game.
    Feeling her up and breaking her down with all the
    words she wishes she could hear like sex to her ears.
    And she says his name and he pulls her frame.
    The sunrises a new day and she says baby it will be ok.
    Because last night it was me and he knew my name.
     
  2. LoneDeranger

    LoneDeranger Trying to pay attention.

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    A painful subject but you expressed it well.

    (But I wouldn't hang around too long if he has a relapse and forgets again.)
     
  3. Lilith Sunrise

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    I was conveying the point of women who sadly put their self worth in men sometimes and only feel whole as a woman by the attention they get from a man. It's a feminist piece. I hope it will inspire women to feel empowered in their own sexuality without the need for a man. Men are great don't get me wrong! I just think as a woman we need to love ourselves first with or without a man. Thanks for the feed back. *LOVE*
     

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