i didnt see it coming

i didnt see it coming
the wind changed much too fast
i remeber seeing you smile
no regard for the past
i can still smell your breath
though i havnt felt it for a while
i wonder if it will all be over
if one day we could look back and sigh
i saw you standing there
disbeleving mixed with fear
the very last moment
when you were standing there
i recal the sound
the cracking of the bat
the way you fell to the ground
the way the sun fell down

 

I like this, it seems to just jump right off the screen to me, very passionate.

 

Thanks

 

Is this about someone you hit with a baseball bat?