Alright.. 18 years old, just had a fight with my parents and thought that writting would get my mind off of everything, and it totally worked, so if this is a success I may continue.. It's my first time ever trying to write a poem or song or anything, you've been warned Haha. Critisize at free will, I take it all into consideration and it'll help shape me up as a writter. If it sucks, then it sucks, at least I tried, right?:afro: Sun, rain, moon or shine All is done and all is fine. Today, tomorrow, no time to borrow In this life, no chance for sorrow. Measured by sand and glass Dissapearing by unhumanly gas Time, time we spent together or apart Organize, work and precautions, it's not all so smart. Bottled up and thrown away, Change your way and we'll play. Mistaken are we Done have we what see The words have been played with time Reversed to the past, there is no climb. Wise words spoken by free spirits Thru rhyme, poem and great lyrics Drugs, religion, great politian No excuse, can't stand in our way to fufil the mission. Bottle up and thrown away, Change your way and we'll play. Do you sleep at night? Forget that fight? Life's not set on a straight road path Understand your choices, it's not math. Open your mind and explore Why make it a chore? It's your freedom and every right, Protest together we'll win this fight! They say lifes short, times the issue Pop that virtue, cause that's oh so untrue The unknown is what we face Reconsider what you fear, do so at your pace. I read that when you post a poem/song or whatever that it'd be great to post on three other threads, for feedback, so as requested I'll do so! And maybe more! Don't want anyone thinking I'm going to post and ask for a favour from you all and not repay it! ! Thank you :2thumbsup:
