erotic story I just wrote

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  1. racketkid38

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    Please let me know what you think. I'm looking for any and all feedback. It's based off my real life friend who a lot of people thought hooked up with a guy once, but it's a totally fictional story.

    http://racketkid38.blogspot.com/2011/05/doug.html

    Dougie was a really good soccer player, and made varsity his sophomore year. But before he had too much time to be happy about it, his girlfriend Erica broke up with him.

    Erica was the first girl he was ever serious about, and the first girl he went all the way with. So it was pretty disappointing to him and it sort of caught him out of nowhere. His friend Ryan was a senior and one of the best players on their team, and they'd hang out a lot because they lived right down the street from each other.

    There were rumors around school that Ryan went both ways, or at least that he hooked up with a guy once when he was drunk. Doug didn't really care and in general no one pushed the issue. It didn't seem like it happened much even if it was true.

    When Doug was telling him about Erica, Ryan responded half-jokingly, but with a bit of sincerity, "Dude, if I was a girl, you'd be the guy for me."

    It was a really nice thing to say and Doug couldn't help but smile a little and appreciate it. When something catches you by surprise, you start to question things, and it definitely made him feel better even if it was a little awkward too. He pushed his buddy away, playfully, telling him "Shut the fuck up, dude".

    "You ever date?" Doug asked him a few minutes later.

    "Not really, I hooked up with this girl a lot last year, but it was just laid back."

    "Never had a girlfriend?"

    "Nah."

    "That's cool," Doug told him.

    "Ya, I mean, I can just wack it if I need to. Not really in a rush."

    "Hahaha for sure man," Doug laughed back.

    "You're gonna be choking it a lot more now huh dude?" Ryan joked at him.

    "Haha I guess," Doug answered.

    And in a sort of perfect harmony that only two horned up teenage boys could pull off, Ryan had his arm around Doug's shoulder, massaging his neck muscles, and Doug started to rub on the inside of Ryan's thigh.

    Ryan reached towards Doug's bulge with his left hand, and Doug did the same back at him. Within a couple minutes the two boys had their hands in each other's shorts and were stroking pretty aggressively. Ryan eventually let go to lower his own shorts, telling Doug "I gotta get off". Doug followed suit and both boys were stroking themselves, with their package totally displayed at this point, and it didn't take Ryan more than another minute or two to lose his load.

    He sprayed it all over himself, moaning a bit, and drenched his t-shirt. "Laundry time I guess," Ryan joked, too caught up in the situation to find a towel or another place to unload. "Jeeze dude," Doug laughed back.

    Ryan lifted his shorts back up and knelt down in front of Doug. Doug was relaxed on the bean bag chair, still stroking himself, and now looking curious but a little endangered by what Ryan had in mind. Ryan put his hands on Doug's knees and asked "You ever get blown by a dude?"

    Doug kept stroking, not sure what to say, just starring back at Ryan. He didn't want to give him the green light, but he didn't want to turn it down either. Ryan pushed Doug's hands away from his dick, and lowered his head. "It's way better dude, trust me", and then leaned down to put on the finishing touches for his buddy.
     
  2. dman1123

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    That is hot
     

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