I thought i'd share this one

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by wild-flowers, May 13, 2011.

  1. wild-flowers

    wild-flowers forever arbitrary

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    Ethereal, the stars mount upon his dark pupils.
    And as his lips part with resonance,
    Every word he spoke mellifluous.
    Awoke his silent lover, effortless.
    From life's intermission.
     
    wild-flowers, May 13, 2011
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  3. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    Awesome poem. Very serene and masterful. I had to look up "mellifluous"
     
    Duck, May 13, 2011
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  5. oxidationofterra

    oxidationofterra Member

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    i'm compelled to say, simply a flowing, beautifull articulation of words... its message whispers
     
    oxidationofterra, May 13, 2011
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  7. ClassicRockGirl

    ClassicRockGirl Member

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    Gorgeous choice of words. Great flow. Keep up the excellent work. :)
     
    ClassicRockGirl, May 15, 2011
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  9. ClassicRockGirl

    ClassicRockGirl Member

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    Gorgeous choice of words. Great flow. Keep up the excellent work. :)
     
    ClassicRockGirl, May 15, 2011
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  11. ~xR*Z*Nx~

    ~xR*Z*Nx~ Member

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    Good ness
     
    ~xR*Z*Nx~, May 16, 2011
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  13. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    meh, over done.
     
    rambleON, May 18, 2011
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