War?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dizz36, Jul 15, 2011.

  1. dizz36

    dizz36 Member

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    Been fightin' so long
    Do you still know what your fighting for?
    Say all you want is peace
    ,but your out on the street promoting war
    Sighning up or sisters and brothers
    For what you call a rightous war
    ,but is it right to take a life?

    When does peace come?
    After the gun shots, after the bombs go off
    When a little boys crying because he lost his mom?

    War has been happening for millions of years
    But what does it bring?
    Heartbreak and tears
    I wanna new aprouch one that will bring hope.

    A cahance at a better life
    For you and me for your children that will come to be

    So put down your and take my hand
    We'll march through the street with nothing but love and peace in hand.

    Tell me what ya thinkk!
    :)
     
  2. Lodog

    Lodog Senior Member

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    Needs more cow bell.
     
  3. dizz36

    dizz36 Member

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    Ahahahah ill be suree to work on that.
    :)
     
  4. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    a poem with a lot of heart! Just IMO. and a passion to see things change in the world.

    Oh, the Earth is not yet 7,000 years old, so there were absolutly no wars "Millions" of years ago...LOL

    Now go give me some feed back in my word verse thread. Be polite and share too. Don't be a glutton.
     
  5. dizz36

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    Ahahha thankk youuu!
    And ohh silly me!
    &i deffintaly will!
     
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