Believing

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Kristina101, Nov 18, 2011.

  1. Kristina101

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    hey everyone, so i thought i would start sharing my poems on here, i dont know i guess i finally have gotten up enough courage to be able to let out and share my feelings, so bare with me plz lol..anyways here is my first on,and im gonna be straight up and honest..i have an eating disorder..and this is what this is what my poems about like many others will be...
    but plz i ask u to not judge me just because of that..it doesnt define me at all so plz dont let it..and if u are curious to know more about my story..and well my life, let me know :) and if anyone ever wants to just talk to me, im a great listener and a message away :p hehe

    BELIEVING
    by:Kristina H

    I sit here looking for a solution​



    to everything im trying to convert


    i start to ponder on the things i need to strengthen


    i know threw-out this journey i must stay alert!


    for i cannot lose this battle


    this battle against myself


    to myself and other i must stay faithful


    though i seem to be losing thyself


    i must be reborn


    and look at whats true


    instead of seeing the things that are torn


    im going to start seeing the things that are new


    so i ask a question to myself, and i swear ill be correct


    for i now i know oneself


    and walking down a new path


    one with beauty and wonder


    now try defeating me and taking on my wrath


    i will no longer be a cheater


    ill play the game fairly


    i feel myself getting alil bit braver


    in this game, i will no longer feel lonel


    i will push aside that feeling of misery


    for this game has almost ended


    i feel myself close to the finish


    but yet i know i am so far away


    but ill take every little thing that has been lended


    finally being able to clear this fog away from my sight,has been a dream of mine


    being able to see what i have wanted to see


    seeing that waistline


    so perfect for me


    knowing its a long road


    but willing to walk it till the end


    this flame in which held me back, i will extinguish


    letting me free of this feeling and urge


    breaking the ice i have been held under


    making it where i am now able to emerge


    from the deepest darkest depths of this prison


    sawing threw the bars,in which cover the truth


    freeing myself from this deadly ADDICTION!
     
  2. wisp

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    nice poem- keep on writing :D , it cleanses the spirit
    peace
     
  3. Kristina101

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    i couldnt agree with you more! thank you so much :)
     
  4. rambleON

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    there is a poetry section...y u no post there ?
     
  5. Kristina101

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    oh! i didnt know that, im still sort of new to this :) sorry, but thanks
     
  6. rambleON

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    :2thumbsup:
     
  7. BonzaiLLC

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    very good, definitely post more :)
     
  8. Duck

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    The spaced out, pink font makes it hard to read. And I really am confused by the choice of pink.

    I liked the poem though.
     
  9. Kristina101

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    well i actually didnt intentionally have it spaces out like that, i didnt preview it like i should have, so once i posted it, it was all spaced out so i dont know what happen there, and idk pink is my favorite color, so i guess thats why i chose that lol but thank you :)
     

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