dazedgatsby's Untitled Poem Thread

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dazedgatsby, Feb 20, 2012.

  1. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Fine minstrels strum a sequence
    So ear shatteringly beautiful
    And the decaying frosted wood lingers about
    Stairways hidden in dark tombs
    Not to be seen

    What have I seen?
    Colours running rapid through bits of paint
    And the cracking up of statue saints
    Blackest rain slightly lingers to stray
    Nothing more should I say

    Neon walls and city so brave
    That can not be seen within inches
    The timid creatures dance and shirk
    Not to be dismayed
    Of endless hours they have slain

    As I stand in this decrepit crypt
    Of horrors beyond my passion
    A passion so secretly kept
    To this day
    To this day and not a further more
     
  2. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Silence upon the daytime
    Birds embraced in thoughtful words
    River tunnels underground wounding mournful enemies
    Deepest, pale blue stricken through your eyes
    Tell quite a tale for the wonderful passerby
    Meloncholic tales of gnomes and mountains pass my eyes
    And your image flurries through the madness

    Far away, the distance cries simple melodies
    And the minstrels gather in the countryside with silence
    Sounds echo through the wind with a silent morbid occurance
    Night has fallen all around, without shape or size
    Mountains have been inhabited by witches and the nameless
    Graves churn with deceptive evil, the risen fall again
    Moonlight shines through the altar tenfold
    And the creatures play for another day
     
  3. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    This sticky substance which makes its way from my sight
    Where has it been all this time without a word?
    Mental psychedelic orgies rage blasphemous laughter
    Your mind can compute the death of it's death machine
    Filthy vermin damaging a queen to her rightful execution
    Blackmailing enemies with merciful consciousness
    Fluid protruding from the plasm of a great wise leader
    Damaging the intelligent with hypnotic spells of black magick martyrs
    Sexual perversions, offbeat chord structures, can they examine our souls?
    Filthy bums run naked stealing trash from psychotic lovers
    Criminals find room for service in this hell without remorse
    Animal hair glued to the walls in an odd fashion
    Without the depth of introspective wonder, the damned cease to exist
    Ringing majestic tales for children with lunatic eyes
    And waiting for silent approach in the warm bliss
    Like the blanket of feathers that entangles the baby from the storm
    Wasted from fortune in the depth of your own mind
    Is it not but a mirror image of everyone else?
     
  4. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Jesus H. Christ on a cross is as fake as Yosemite Sam
    He died for nothing, a nonexistant creature for your thoughts
    He can't save you from the pain and you have only yourself to blame
    God is the metaphor for your hypocrisy and you shall pay
    You think you know it all because something happens to go your way
    And when you die you will see it all come through to your brain
    Religion is as true as Jack the Ripper as the judge in a mad court
    Your sadness is handed to you on a silver tray while your weak
    And you will cry for your entity, you will even pray but nothing is there
    Your soul is crushed and your mind melted away, decaying with laughter
    Slipping into madness and cursed with everlasting solitude
    You fall into a deep pit, will you ever get out and break the hold?
    Crawling and writhing with mental anguish, bleeding through your soul
    You will die stuck in your cell and you will rot like an hallucination shall
     
  5. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Your sick, twisted somewhat delayed mind control
    Psychologically break me up, destroy me, kill me
    You are a witch contemplating death, but you need to bring me down
    Coming from a pit of fire and brimstone with a damned look in your eyes
    Kiss the wounds of pain and simplicity and sing me softly to sleep
    Finish the job and crawl away from Death's scythe
    Hypocritical fool, heartless queen, brainless king, you better fucking scream
    You destroyed my soul, tore open my head and creeped around up there
    Someday it will pass, finish yourself off and make it last
    While I sit here and laugh, smoke my herb, and buy more grass
    I loved the way you talked until the world took it's evil way
    And brought it down upon my soul, now you are just another day
     
  6. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    I'd like to say that if anyone wants to comment then your more than welcome...

    :sifone:
     
  7. Tyrsonswood

    Tyrsonswood Senior Moment Lifetime Supporter

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    You letters are very small... ;)
     
  8. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Is this better?

    :D
     
  9. Tyrsonswood

    Tyrsonswood Senior Moment Lifetime Supporter

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    It's the old eye's, don't ya know...
     
  10. Tyrsonswood

    Tyrsonswood Senior Moment Lifetime Supporter

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    This one's pretty cool... :2thumbsup:
     
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    stinkfoot truth

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    There once was a man full of verse
    Whose writing was struck with a curse
    Had no sense of rhyming
    and really bad timing
    So Gatsby, you could be much worse.
     
  12. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    There once was a squirrel
    Orison319 was his name
    One day he flew
    And I said "Holy shit brah, do that again!"
    He flew and rested upon thy field of marihuana
    And he got high and said with a sigh
    "Fuckin a... let us shmoke sum more"
    And again he rolled...
     
  13. Fairlight

    Fairlight Banned

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    Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe.Kind of vibe.I enjoyed.Thanks.
     
  14. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    In which right mind do I deserve this love
    Certainly the happiness of a madman, but I'm the lesser
    Oh, should I cease, should I withdrawal all my wrong emotions
    And simply cast them into the endless turning sea of eternity
    Talking to myself would be talking to you, but I see that now
    Do you not want to appear pleased in front of the celebration?
    The guests seem quite eager to hear those adventurous tales
    And they sit and drink their mescaline laced tea, and listen
    Suddenly, these dreams take the body, submerge into material beings
    See, see how they sit, they spilt their milk, and whispered in syncopation
    Now they all rise, and have that orgy of the soul, and the objects rose
    Clock striking midnight, the bell tolls, and all leave in some altered rhythm
    Terrified the children watch as cosmic laughter surrounds their sleep
    Darling, you're party was wonderful, so they say, as they gather in their hell
    And so it has been written, they shall rise nevermore, and cease our terror
     
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    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Sour fucker, I see you sitting there
    Cooking time, coupled rhymes
    But you see its not me
    Sitting there with my hand in my hair
    Dripping sweat, and blood, through the cracks
    Your visions, are incompatible with who we are
    Don't play with fire, if you can't put it out
    Can't even light a match
    Fuck you
    Fuck me
    Fuck
    And drown
    Drown down in a pool, a pool of wine
    With a trio that plays empty words
    If you saw yourself, you'd cry
    Hypocrite
    Take the easy way out
    And find yourself out
    You're just a sour fucker
     
  16. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Write your name with a sewing needle
    You should let that bleed through a little
    Sitting at home, you stared at the wall
    Waiting for a call, but no one is home
    You're life in a line, and that is the filth of mine
    Take a walk, tell them to just fuck off
    Whisper in their ear, to get shit in gear
     
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    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Endless, white dreaming swan
    Floating, on a lake or pond
    Bathing, crying to hear song
    Oh, beautiful lake, hear the trees
    Hear the waining sound of the clouds
    And that magnificent whisper
    From now to which it became, but nothing

    Smell, the sweet baker's oven
    Soothing, till again he bakes another
    Steep hillside, where the marble steps reside
    "Whoot!" -- the birds cry pirched in the wood
    In that wooded hollow, creatures call home
    The scent of dew, encloses them in the atmosphere
    Of that cozy morning, when the sun never shone so brightly
     
  18. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    I'm alone
    I'm stoned
    I'm dead
    Inside

    I express my feelings
    In the most primitive manner
    I hate people
    But I'm lonely
    I can't seem to find a decent person

    I'm not worthy
    Of love
    Of trust
    Of friendship
    Of kindness
    So spit in my face
    And stab me in the heart

    Kill me
    But shoot my veins full of dope
    And then leave me in the gutter
    Where I belong for a long time
    And don't worry because I'll be alright
    As long as I'm alone

    I'll follow my own rules
    Thank you
    So you can fuck off, please
    I'm such a hypocrite
    When it comes to my desires

    I need life
    I need people
    But you mindless fuckers
    Aren't people
    I'm not a person either, though
    Whatever, I just wanna get stoned
     
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