The time. Where has it gone? It seems like the days of yesterday were just here! Laughing joyful child turned to a gray stone Where have the close ones gone? I have become The Changeling Possibly.
As I continue to post my works, I would appreciate any comments or criticisms that any of you may have. I'm aiming to better my poetry, so anything that you have to say helps!
I think it has a great flow and really wise words. "Where have the close ones gone?" I really dig that line because I feel like I can't get close to anyone now a days either. I feel a connection with this, it's small but powerful. Thanks for sharing, hope you post more.
The night has once again set upon us my children Let it take you to your most wild dreams and fantasies Escape the horrors of your daily lives But it is there that you know, You’re alive.
The way is shrouded, your mind unclear You know the end is so very near What is this, is it fear? Must be. edit: Just wanted to say that my next piece will be an attempt at something that is longer than just a few lines .
