Two Lone Stars

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ClassicRockGirl, Mar 13, 2012.

  1. ClassicRockGirl

    ClassicRockGirl Member

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    Two Lone Stars

    Two lone stars in the sky
    Huge and dangling like a thread
    Upon an abyss of air ocean
    Aligned side by side
    Radiating devine
    As if they were meant to pair

    And I guess
    This is a sign isn't it?
    Could it be put anymore plainly
    Than in my atmosphere?

    To where I met you
    By chance,
    out of the universe's fruitful palms
    Is how I feel your soul
    Stir along with mine too

    And I'm thankful for the unknown
    And I'm greatful to set free the wrong
    Of what is mostly considered
    unreal
     
  2. superbad

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    Ah! A budding poet I see! :p You are deep. Generally I am the one on the receiving end of this complement... First time that I'm saying this to someone. I like the first stanza even more than the rest though. I can see what you are getting at (I think)
     
  3. ClassicRockGirl

    ClassicRockGirl Member

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    Thank you so much! :)
    It means a lot. <3
    Do you have any poetry on the forums? :)
     
  4. superbad

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    Well I had this poem, "about a boy" I think it was awesome. Well atleast I liked it a lot. I used to carry it in my wallet all the time. Till I lost it that is. Some smart ass pick pocketed me. Man! I lost a lot of money X_X. Well anyway, if I ever find a soft copy or do a remake. I'll show you.
     
  5. superbad

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    Moral of the story: Keep your wallet safe when in a crowded region, specially when you're in India. haha xD I couldn't reply to your visitor message since I don't have the "sufficient priveledges" to do so. I think it's because I'm new around here.
     

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