Dear

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ClassicRockGirl, Mar 22, 2012.

  1. ClassicRockGirl

    ClassicRockGirl Member

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    "Drop it! Drop it!"
    You yelled as we rushed into eachother
    My bags rolling to the ground
    As we settled in our new home
    Right there on the street corner
    We walked to the hill

    Little did I know
    That the mumbling music
    And clouded stars
    Would be my recollection
    Of a dear
    Of a poet, stretching his passion
    Through hazy eyed mirrors
    Of a girl I hardly know
    That you introuduced me to

    Little did I know
    That this feeling would errupt
    So naturally
    And fill my always aching hunger
    That is here now because you're gone
     
  2. Bonkai

    Bonkai Later guys

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    You go so many places in this, i read it a few times to make sure i got everything. Sweet piece..."Of a girl I hardly know, That's you introuduced me to" that the line that sold me :D
     
  3. ClassicRockGirl

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    :) <3 Thanks Bonk.
     
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