Saturn

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by KissYourKiller, Dec 16, 2004.

  1. KissYourKiller

    KissYourKiller Member

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    Got off a bus and I looked around.
    I could save on drugs or eat some Taco Bell.
    Approaching the corner,
    do not pass go.
    For the rest of my life.
    For the rest of my life.

    I took a trip to the moon.
    Saw the rings of Saturn,
    bloom into the 5'oclock news.
     
  2. Free as a bird

    Free as a bird Member

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    Thats pretty damn cool, one of the best ive read on here. Youfelt confident enough with it not to over express yourself, and that rocks my socks :)
     
  3. KissYourKiller

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    It's actually from a song i made about a year ago called Saturn.

    this is an older version of the beggining of saturn.
    http://www.geocities.com/taxavier/music.html click on "download this file" in the upper left of the screen. Its small so it should download fast.
     
  4. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Yet that the weight of Saturn could drag us down to drown in the miasmic mire profound, unknown and therefore feared by those with no recourse to the source to which we are all bound.

    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
  5. RainbowCat

    RainbowCat Senior Member

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    i might just be stupid, but i don't get it. sounds good, though
     
  6. KissYourKiller

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    nice. like something of the matter. I suppose. Maybe not but so.
     
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