For Hannah <3

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sir smiles, Jun 14, 2012.

  1. Sir smiles

    Sir smiles Guest

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    I wrote this in about 30 seconds while thinking of the girl I'm going to see tomorrow. It felt so nice writing it. :)
    Actually, I typed it out right now and changed it up a bit.

    Original:
    I sit here and write,
    not a worry in sight.
    Oh! What a great delight,
    now that you are in my sight.
    How beautiful you look,
    in the bright sun light.

    Final:
    I sit here and write,
    not a worry in my sight.
    What a great delight,
    now that You are in my sight!
    Oh! So beautiful You look,
    in the bright Sun's light.

    Actual final:
    I sit here and write,
    not a worry in my Sight.
    What a great delight,
    now that You are in my Sight!
    Oh! So beautiful You look,
    in the bright Sun's light.

    Sight = heart
    You = Hannah
    Sun = love
     
  2. foresting

    foresting Member

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    Ah so weird, my name is Hannah!

    If I were your Hannah I'd be so flattered at what you wrote :)
     
  3. Sir smiles

    Sir smiles Guest

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    Oh wow lol
    Well I do hope she is! I'm going to go find some some flowers for her right now... I asked her what her favorite color was and she said turquoise. I asked what her second favorite was and she said orange. I think I can find some orange flowers... the turquoise might be hard though.
    I got the idea because she posted on her fb her perfect guy would bring her this
    https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...3x403/600307_346487938756972_1215661947_n.jpg
    So I'm bringing flowers and a poem...
    It has been years since there has been a girl who has made me want to write.
     

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