Gratefuldead/blacksabbath influenced song

i made this song yesterday and id like honest opinions of it
its not really too much like black sabbath or gratefuldead its a combination of them both with a bit of other bands style from that time..
im only 20 so i didnt grow up then but my parents did and i have heard enough to kinda get down that style of music i really enjoy some of that kind of music compared to the newer stuff thats out today :2thumbsup:

anyway here is my song please take a listen to it and offer me some advice some criticism or some compliments please be honest about it too i need all the help i can get so i can further my hopes and chances at a music career

here is the song link just click on it and it will automatically play although i do suggest that you turn your volume up a little bit =)

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=11754239&q=hi&newref=1

 

you know a comment on here would be nice lol i got all these views but no comments =(
(hint hint) lol

 

where is it going? it has no clear structure. perhaps you should take the existing track and put it over a rhythm track.

 

its just a project like i said its not really a song song
kinda like something id like to add to a different song some day x) thanks for the comment atleast someone cares lol

 

i dig it man, keep on jammin!!!