a little story

Discussion in 'Free Love' started by dud3, Jul 28, 2012.

  1. dud3

    dud3 Guest

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    Hi guys i'm 16 and i wrote something to my GF and i don't if this is the good way to do it ;).

    I would slightly take that cover of from you...just as ur laying on ur bad i would get slowly i would get close to you , my lisp will be as close as i can but i wont kiss you i'll let you hear my breath. then i would slightly and so deeply start kissing you. then i would start touching ur arms and my hand going from ur arms then touching all over ur body.
    I would be still kissing you more deeply and breathing harder , my hands will be all around ur beck , i would be playing with my tongue while im kissing you , i'll go a little back and i'll start licking ur ear. i will go a little down all the way kissing till i reach ur neck i'll licking it all over and biting it slightly , my hand will we around ur back and going slowly down under ur back till i reach ur hips , then i'll grab them so F hard and take you up to me.
    I'll start licking em soo hard , my tongue will be going slowly all around ur nipple, then i will slightly bite ur nipple.I'll get more aggressive and start sucking em harder , i'll grab ur hips harder and hit you on the wall again.
    I'll grab ur hips and take u with me and i'll still on a chair i would doing everything at the same time kissing , biting ur neck , touching all over ur body... Then i'll grab you again and lay you on the flore. And that's where the real fun begins
    I'll grab ur hips and take u with me and i'll still on a chair i would doing everything at the same time kissing , biting ur neck , touching all over ur body... Then i'll grab you again and lay you on the floor. And that's where the real fun begins. I would slightly go down ur body , all the way kissing biting , till i reach ur dangerous area. I'll be stroking it with ur underwear on. then i'll take them of slowly.
    I would slowly start kissing the upper part(clitoris) of ur dangerous area , so slowly , i'll get a little faster , then i'll start putting one finger inside of you and still sucking on it , just getting harder and harder , i'll put my two middle fingers inside you still sucking it harder. then i'll take off my fingers an start stroking ur upper part of dangerous area harder and faster , still sucking.
    then i'll take off my fingers an start stroking ur upper part of dangerous area harder and as fast as i can , still sucking. Ur legs on my shoulders , i'll pull my thing off , and start putting it slightly inside of you. I'll put all my thing inside of you. I'll get harder and faster and still stroking it. I'll go so hard u'll feel it on ur bones.
    I'll be hitting u hard , then i'll put me hands around ur back and take u with me , and i'll sit on a chair , and i'll grab ur hips and ur ass and hit you from down. still sucking ur Breast, biting , kissing you harder , getting all wet.U will be all screaming and talking dirty to me ...
     
  2. SouthSideDeuce2202

    SouthSideDeuce2202 Member

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    sounds like some shit a virgin would write. Man up, Girls dont want to hear about what you would do to them, They want you to show them, if you talk about you'll get no where. Take action man !
     
  3. bob44044

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    Go back to school and learn some English, before you get in bed with someone.
     
  4. eugenicsreject

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    Yup bad grammar is never sexy... sorry bro, a hot fuck letter is only as good as its prose my man. Hopefully your girl enjoyed it.... and there is no shame in learning and practicing and getting better.
     
  5. monkjr

    monkjr Senior Member

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    All of what you've written describes what I think a guy would find interesting about a sexual experience. (i.e. the physical pleasure and movements).

    There's almost nothing in what you've written that describes anything psychological and emotional that would be appealing about the experience for a female. I'm not saying females don't like the physical aspect of sex, I'm sure they do, but the emotional and psychological side of it is so much more powerful on average.

    If I were a girl, I'd read that and think you were just treating me like a piece of meat...not very romantic or emotionally bonding. Some girls might think what you've written is downright rude.
     
  6. Unufalready

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    I think you're trying to show your sensuality through your actions, but if you are going to woe your girl you'll have to write a lot better than that. You need to tell her how much you care for her and how you look deep into her eyes, and you can almost your hearts beat as one, that kind of stuff. Get with the program man! lol
     
  7. sexycouple1219

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    Use the terms gentle and caressing more often, try to focus more on things she likes, and definitely read through and spell check it before you give it to her. Nice start though!
     

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