Creation

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by |SunDriedLily|, Aug 16, 2012.

  1. |SunDriedLily|

    |SunDriedLily| Member

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    ~ A poem dedicated to the God and the Goddess.. ~



    The phallus of wisdom,
    The womb of emotion,
    Love encircling,
    A wreath of stars and wind,
    Place it on the lover's crown,
    Twisting,
    Floating,
    Connecting,
    Reaching higher into the universe,
    The embrace of the most genuine love...


    Life,
    Growing inside,
    A rounded creation of warmth..
    A lover's embrace,
    Gentle,
    Vivid,
    The kiss of life,
    Of birth...
    The water of life,
    A river of emotion,
    Her lover's soft embrace,
    Coaxing,
    Kissing,
    Touching...


    A child,
    Innocent,
    Bright,
    Fragile,
    A mother's loving bosom,
    A father's protective arms,
    A constant cycle of love...
     
  2. CherokeeMist

    CherokeeMist Senior Member

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    I love the "traditional" aspect of roles and process.

    Great, really, the cycle of life is most beautiful when observed from the almost archaic POV. Ancient, broad, universal, entirely devoid of reason and structure in place of free-floating feeling.

    I like!
     
  3. |SunDriedLily|

    |SunDriedLily| Member

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    Oh, thank you so much!
    This is just how I write. I don't rhyme much. It's mostly about the rhythm. =)
     
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