If thousands, maybe millions sought to love, it seems that when push did shove, there would be some overlap and thus a reason not to fap, at least not solo or alone no more empty dial tone. perhaps the point is just to seek, butt heads, to rut, and compete, but never really find and keep. think it's time I switched to sheep?
I should explain why I thought the rest was meh after the third line. It is because the first three are legitimately good in my book, then with the fap lines you took this in a silly direction that juxtaposed a good start with a common finish.
your poem has a good flow to it. some people can't pull of the rhyming thing, they make up words or word things weird, but you made it sound natural.
Thanks for all the feedback. I decided I couldn't take myself too seriously, so went in a different direction. However, I am a little dissapointed noone decided to give their advice and wisdom on love and sheep.
