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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Dec 23, 2004.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all in moments of ......


    what nothing takes ,tempted opened
    out.
    living souls ,remembered doubt...
    yet shining love,gathered so free.
    blinking visions, maybe the world
    will some day,some way
    end this and be .just be.

    your body knows,beats from within
    not music drifted upon the ear.
    but hearts of life,minds full open
    wide....
    gentle touch,lips smile. oh moan
    on,moan over me.let the ripples,
    cover,
    let me see,let me see let me...

    what comes from this,lost soul ,
    alone.
    not listening humans,differences
    created the mould..
    dont bleed for them,just hold your
    life in hand.
    for death sunk long before.
    truth outstretched,..
    a lie...

    what has come,passed .gone.
    change is near,a change longed
    for,i longed for,i longed.....


    thank you
    maybe words dont give life enough
    yet words involve the sense to touch......

    love n peace from saff
    oh moan on, be you ,be free to be....
     
  2. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    I really liked this peice. It was positive and gave me a sense of encouragement.
    Thank you for posting.
    <3
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    thank you for reply

    im overwhelmed that reached within
    my words of truth,pain living on.always on....

    love npeace from saff
    a big thank you ...
    very true to be positive to be alive to speak from within
    all we feel and think from seeing...
     
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