Bella Luna (a poem)

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  1. xmas

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    Bella Luna ~ Gabrielle A

    Hers was his coffin...where they had haunted~
    often climbing up an endless dark stair...to..
    where he promised to keep..her safely
    tucked under the... bella-luna-light
    she'd left him a note, for dreams tuned off key --
    bodies that slept upon.. cloudless starry nights..
    In their sweet soliloquy, under that silent sky.

    A lonely winter-lude of almost mornings
    where delinquency left unspent..dreams--
    for all those leavings that crept up so silently..
    black cherries who blossom'd in maddening...
    She isn't crying ...no...she's choking...

    Open your eyes, cross to die, no more lies
    for your thirst-less kind, are
    those who tempted me to feel this pain
    And tomorrow will find me lost again
    in my own wonder..wishing for him

    as these winds keep on mocking
    because I was so broken...and..
    What was once was a muse now free
    to laugh and sing...hauntingly
    and still they keep..on taunting me
    with the false promises of the moon.
     
  2. fleamailman

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    ("...very moving, you have talent indeed..." went the goblin liking it, adding "...do you have any other poems, as I would love to read them then...")
     
  3. TAZER-69

    TAZER-69 Listen To Your Heart! Lifetime Supporter

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    Very Good.
     
  4. XavierJSun

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    Great job!
     

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