Idk if I have a name for this yet

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ToFunToDie, Jan 28, 2013.

  1. ToFunToDie

    ToFunToDie Senior Member

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    we grew together
    i learned so much
    got so close
    i loved your touch
    now your gone
    it hurts to much
    you were always there
    i always could find you
    never once did you question me
    just showed up instantly
     
  2. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    try to break away from rhyming, open up..
     
  3. SpacemanSpiff

    SpacemanSpiff Visitor

    i liked it


    the your-you're thing caught a nerve though


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  4. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    I'm feeling it right now, for personal reasons, but it definitely resonates with me.
     
  5. ToFunToDie

    ToFunToDie Senior Member

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    Thank you for the feedback guys. BBAD glad you liked it. Droop.. Of course. :)

    And To the rhyming yea. it is something I need to sometimes break away of. It is a habit when writing about certain things
     
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