rain stains (waterfall)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by standingdeer, Dec 26, 2004.

  1. standingdeer

    standingdeer Member

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    Northern wind why do you rush into my heart
    colapsing my reason
    stemming from the tree of thought
    leaves changing with each exception to moment
    Autumn turns to winter where rain falls endlessly
    sky becomes hazy gray for days
    ocean scraps the beach shore for victims
    a despair on the heart of this island

    Tapestry of light
    reflecting through the files of snow
    flakes cascade from a silhouette
    a mountain that sits in contimplation of its feelings
    mainly the dimise of man

    Questions spill from the quaking rush of a short river
    that seems to fall

    standingdeer
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Autumn turns to winter where rain falls endlessly
    sky becomes hazy gray for days

    Really liked these two lines. They're true and almost tactile. Keep writing!
     
  3. DaisaeFaerie

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    love that
    don't understand it
    but love it. :)
     

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