Okay THIS IS SO WIERD

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Free as a bird, Dec 25, 2004.

  1. Free as a bird

    Free as a bird Member

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    I got a littlle bit (Very very) high the other day, and i wrote this, its so wierd reading it now, its got no sence to it!!!
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    Just leave me, cant save me, wont love you
    Just leave me, cant save me, just let me down.

    Follow my minds instructions, and dismantle:
    Dismantle. Take it apart, rip me apart, come on down
    and hit the ground, so high so high, never shout aloud.

    Just Leave me, cant save me, fall baby
    Just leave me, cant save me, cherish me love.

    Rush rush purple sundance in the haze of the sun
    strip it away, polkadots and jigsaw puzzles
    pass out on my knees, do what you please!!!

    Just leave me, cant save me, blood loves me
    just leave me, cant save me, moster ate me

    And Im swimming like i never seen you dancing
    . Running and parading , running and parading
    talking cause my voice is all i see!! all i see!!

    Just leave me, cant save me, one of those things,
    just leave me, cant save me, scream and shout!!

    up and down and soaring in the meadows, whenever
    will i ever feel a limosine in my m-m-mind????
    orange yellow cant you pin my down brother?

    Just leave me, cant save me, you want me
    Just leave me, cant save me, come get me!!!

    And after all the confusion, fire is all that remains
    in my fingertips, and fly fly fly high, my earthly shadow
    cripple me but never ever ever silence me.

    Just leave me, cant save me, i hate you
    Just leave me, cant save me, who cares anyway???
     
  2. kidder

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    It sounds a little like ancient Egyptian writings found in the sarcophagi of the 'young princes.' There is a numerical agency at work here that only one with a knowledge of such things could decipher. Worlds might wait upon your very breath. I feel newly humble.
     
  3. Free as a bird

    Free as a bird Member

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    Wow lol such praise!
     
  4. wideyed

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    its kind of extatically confused, which i like. maybe if cobain was more of a hippie, he might write something like this. the repeating verse makes me think you were driving at something that perhaps even you didnt know at the time.. favourite bit - " cant you pin my down brother?" i think its cool.
     
  5. Free as a bird

    Free as a bird Member

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    Thanks alot! thats really really cool!
     
  6. BradinTheGreat

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    Wow that's some deep stuff, sister. It's like your mind was opened to a new world and you poured it onto the paper. This is really great.
     
  7. BradinTheGreat

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    What were you on? It seems like it really opened your mind and helped you see your emotions in a new way, unless that's just your creativity. Anyway, it's super chill.
     
  8. Free as a bird

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    LSD lol...i dont make a habit of it
     
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