missing

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by youngatheart, Jan 26, 2013.

  1. youngatheart

    youngatheart Member

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    Missing-


    we made this place up in our heads
    you & i
    what's with these eternally fixed nights,
    silent, silent, silence..
    THAT irksome thing: the quiet, like a slice of nothing, a little piece of absence
    THAT reminds me of what i am to you.
    everyone waiting here was once in love. i am not lost to
    You.
    merely covered up by night skies. see?...i am that 4th star, the one over there.
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    The easiest way to be sure that love is mutual is to be comfortable together in silence. Anybody who knows someone long enough will run out of things to talk about. Nice imagery, though.
     
  3. skyfire

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    ooh i like! very in the moment
     
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