You have good sentence structure. Good choice of words. Concise. Easily understandable. Seems like you write pretty well. How's it going?
it crossed my mind that maybe someone else might have told you your writing sucks ? yes i disagree.keep writing.its a gift.:2thumbsup:
I'm stoned and when I'm stoned I am always more creative, but even when stoned am I horrible at writing.
color me blown away. wow. no joke, in my head that post is so complex with perspectives and questions, i'm not sure which direction to approach it from step one:drop all assumptions step two: +1 eace:
@dazedgatsby read my wordplay thread for some methods on using words together. One way to improve is to read others and engage in the community. I see you don't offer comments and or support your peers here. Being a selfish writer hurts in the long run. It's not about pleasing yourself persay, but helping others to help yourself. This section hosts many selfish people, seems to draw them.