I've realized something that is Very Important.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dazedgatsby, Jun 4, 2013.

  1. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    My writing sucks.
     
  2. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    why did ya come to that conclusion.was it all on your own or did ya get help.
     
  3. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    I have come to this conclusion myself.

    Why? Do you disagree?
     
  4. KevinH

    KevinH Just Floating Here

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    You have good sentence structure. Good choice of words. Concise. Easily understandable.

    Seems like you write pretty well.


    How's it going?
     
  5. lively_girl

    lively_girl Member

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    Will you give us something yours to read, so that we can give you an informed opinion?
     
  6. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    I will later.
     
  7. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    it crossed my mind that maybe someone else might have told you your writing sucks ? yes i disagree.keep writing.its a gift.:2thumbsup:
     
  8. lively_girl

    lively_girl Member

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    :)
     
  9. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    I'm stoned and when I'm stoned I am always more creative, but even when stoned am I horrible at writing.
     
  10. lively_girl

    lively_girl Member

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    What do you think is horrible about your writing?
     
  11. Voyage

    Voyage Noam Sayin

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    color me blown away. wow. no joke, in my head that post is so complex with perspectives and questions, i'm not sure which direction to approach it from :confused:
    step one:drop all assumptions
    step two: +1
    :peace:
     
  12. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    It's how I use words. It seems like I try too hard.
     
  13. lively_girl

    lively_girl Member

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    Too many words for too little meaning?
     
  14. Meliai

    Meliai Members

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    If you realize what you're doing wrong then you know how to improve :)
     
  15. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    @dazedgatsby read my wordplay thread for some methods on using words together.

    One way to improve is to read others and engage in the community. I see you don't offer comments and or support your peers here. Being a selfish writer hurts in the long run.

    It's not about pleasing yourself persay, but helping others to help yourself. This section hosts many selfish people, seems to draw them.
     
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