A few of my haikus, hope you enjoy..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DrewSpeaksTrue, Mar 22, 2013.

  1. DrewSpeaksTrue

    DrewSpeaksTrue Member

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    1. Let me feel you God
    Occupy my heart and soul
    Please teach me to live

    2.Do not slay dragons
    Choose to ride them instead
    Respect their nature

    3.Mother nature speak
    Open my heart to your peace
    Let us become one


    4.The city lights glow
    Little bright stars you can reach
    Oh so wonderful


    5.Tell me what you see
    What's the color of my soul?
    Look with different eyes

    6.For every road block
    There is a way around it
    Let nature guide you
     
  2. Aerianne

    Aerianne Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    I especially like #5
     
  3. bird_migration

    bird_migration ~

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    I especially like #2. It shows your deep knowledge of Asian philosophy and the nature of things. Where some writers need an entire book to transfer that message, you do it in one simple haiku. Kudos!
     
  4. DrewSpeaksTrue

    DrewSpeaksTrue Member

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    Thanks so much, peace and many blessings to you. =)
     
  5. Bhaskar

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    Ireally liked #2. The others didn't have the same punch to them.
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Bhaskar... is it You ~~* 3 was my favorite...

    Can you feel the chill
    the consuming emptiness
    death is gradual
     

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