Whispers iIt's like I'm in a cube I'm already fucked, my life screwed. Should I end it or mend it? O D on glass may it fast or fight with all my might and stay in sight. Would it be pleasant to end my existents ? Would they giggle to see my eyes rolled back? FUCK that I'm a gaze in your eyes make you surprise . Make you think of death and all that fucked up mess. I'm a live the best and put your life to the test.
I'm not a fan of rap or hiphop but if that's the audience you're writing for I think you're doing mighty fine!