Hi I have never written poetry before, and am shocked i did. Tell me what you think. He knew he was coming he could feel him waiting, watching like a man with no barriers A man who could see no pain A man who wanted the end wanted the pain of pleasure the sufferage of his own relm A sufferage that man has created their own self helping where the beginnings of awkenment the pain of realization Pleasure is god nowhere else but here light of awakening sit back and recongize pains of enlightenment The end The end of all to come
with only two pronouns used to describe two people [both being he or him] and one is not capitalized [im asuming one is God] makes for a bit of a diffucult read in my opinion... and about never writing poetry before...everyone writes poetry, no one is ever new...only new at actually putting it down and stuff...i hope everyone sees what i mean
