Just being honest

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoFarAway, Feb 4, 2005.

  1. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Now listen here, I'm just being honest
    I don't like my world, I'm burnt out on it
    My dream, the american dream
    Sex, Drugs, and Rock & Roll
    Has shunned me and sucked me dry
    My mind's eye is blind to what I see
    And my blissfull haze prevents me from coming clean

    I've tried to change, I've fallen down
    I've tried to die, I've dropped out
    I've been trapped, I'm in doubt

    I don't know why, I have no reason
    Just something I must write, something to believe in

    Myself.

    Honest.
     
  2. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    i like it. honesty is always better than being uplifting-in my opinion. as long as you put yourself on the paper that's all that matters.
     
  3. *peace*child*

    *peace*child* Member

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    This part of the poem is my favorite but I like it all. Peace and love...
     
  4. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Thanks guys, I appreciate it.

    I like it more now that I read it again.
     

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