quick fix poetry

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bluefairy, Feb 7, 2005.

  1. bluefairy

    bluefairy Member

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    no one says "excuse me"

    no one says "im sorry"
    no one wishes to be heard
    and no one sees the world.
    what if i was left
    what if it were gone
    would the world look back at you
    and say those simple words?

    im sorry
    im hurt
    i feel the pain inside
    but no one looks at it and sees the simple word

    no one says "excuse you"
    or even "i love"
    its too simple to ignore
    the simple feets above.

    curl your toes and lead the line
    your just like all the rest
    hide your thoughts
    your mind
    and leave at any time.
    its just the same as yesterday
    when i was all alone
    youre here, im here
    but leave us all alone.

    pass by and knock me over
    dont look a second time.
    youre not the shit you think you are
    and im not it either

    see you in the lime light
    see you next in line
    ill say im sorry,
    you'll say im sorry,
    only in another world
    cuz we're like all the rest
    who say we'll do it next time
    but when ever we see it coming
    we run and hide
    and leave it all behind
    until we're next in line
    until the next time
    until i see you once again
    in another life.
     
  2. bluefairy

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    tell me what you think...not about the poem, but tell me what you thought of when you read this. i would really like to know how people interpret what i write and even what other people write. it's interesting to see how i felt when i wrote this and how others feel when they read it. lemme know what you think. i bet you'll be surprised.
    p.l.and above all, happiness,

    desiree michele
     
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