Teen Heaven

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Desert Stargazer, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. Desert Stargazer

    Desert Stargazer Member

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    Nothing beats a good malted
    on a barstool with a ghost
    And not much can match the gleaming eyes
    from the poodle skirt of a host
    What feels better than a spin to Motown on a Roll ?
    and never... I mean never !
    will a Rock Teen lose his soul
    C February 6 2005 Desert Stargazer
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    nothing beats Screaming
    Orgasms, flipping poodle
    skirts down on all fours
     
  3. Desert Stargazer

    Desert Stargazer Member

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    "And nothing beats looking up a poodle skirt...and seeing a moray eel with sharp teeth looking back at you,saying "You leave my girl alone..she's the one by the bar in the tuxedo..now scram ! " Life has no boundaries in the bizarro world......
     
  4. littleskinny

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    This was very cool, esp the opening two lines. Like it.
     
  5. Desert Stargazer

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    Thanks Van Astral and Little skinny ! Life should be fun. Walking on the wild side can be a treat, if only as a spectator.
     
  6. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    fantastic poem, very fun to read and I love the energy it has... definitely tops!
     
  7. VanAstral

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    ha, yes!
    my sourheart,
    with spinning pink skirt
    you send me an eye
    i send you a tooth

    postcards from your cubed world,
    illuminated by a black hole,
    reveal a virtuous retribution,
    a reward for punished souls
    who wade through deep truth
    and come out smelling like carrion

    (i like a little salt on my vegetarian,
    sweet solecist, anti-humanitarian,
    human totalitarian, total literary merry
    prankster)

    you rose for a mean amish boy
    a tease with cheese
    whiz with milquetoast...

    in inaccurate reticulate
    the alarm clock is singing:
    it’s time to go to bed

    super aroused, super jerk,
    with oxyacetylene eyes
    accidentally welds
    his hand to his penis

    poodle in the water,
    retrieving a cocker spaniel
    choking on a well dressed penguin

    its highly developed
    sense of smell sounds
    useless underwater

    moray eel with long mohawk
    fly fishes for its missing fins,
    tucked away in a warm wet crevice
    bathing in its own poisonous spit
    bubbles bounded by rainbows...

    bizarre,
    secret's been identified
    daddio, dos cool...
     
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