Hey Mr. Spooky

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Desert Stargazer, Feb 7, 2005.

  1. Desert Stargazer

    Desert Stargazer Member

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    Hey Mr Spooky
    can you lend me a smile ?
    you've been sitting in the door way
    for quite a long while

    The bottle that you finished
    is giving off a glow
    your dangling participle
    is sticking to the snow

    I guess you're completely dead now
    so I will bid a fond farewell
    I may fill that doorway next
    good bye you just can't tell


    February 14 2005 Desert Stargazer

     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    february 14th? but it's only the 9th today. spooky:p

    the spooky man seems kinda alone poor thing. good realistic writing. me liking

     
  3. Desert Stargazer

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    Lozi ! You caught me...I had written several poems, (and this one) for a Valentine message, but forgot to change the Date.
     
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