War Horse Blues

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Desert Stargazer, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. Desert Stargazer

    Desert Stargazer Member

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    In one awful moment
    I fell to the ground
    and during that moment I wept
    And as my blood trickled
    from the loudest of sounds
    my mother assuredly slept
    All for nothing
    my life spark had ebbed
    and the illusions that I'd held
    slipped away
    The snow speckled lashes
    then fluttered and blinked
    at this thinking
    on loan for the day
    My blanket was tattered
    and dampened with fear
    my heart beating fast like a drum
    I hear a voice whisper
    with such trepidation
    "Oh god we're all dead
    here they come"
    I left that dead body
    and went to my funeral
    to see what morticians could do
    the man with the charm
    took mom by her arm
    " Your son looks so nifty in blue"
    The coffin was cozy
    the people were nosey
    as they swept past my casket
    in groups
    While a man in a stovepipe
    climbed onto his horsie
    and saluted the deadest of troops
    C December 29 2004 Stargazer
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    again, another effective piece of writing there desert stargazer.
     
  3. Desert Stargazer

    Desert Stargazer Member

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    Thank you Lozi. It can pertain to human soldiers,or the horses of war...watching humans..and the stovepipe refers to Abe Lincoln's hat...War is universal..with all the pain, and illusion....
     
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