a poem i wrote while on acid

i was really fucked up one night and decided to write this poem to some chick (but somehow it upset her). i know its a bit crude but keep in mind that i was under the influence when i wrote this thing

You are a super chick
my dick is thick
I feel like I've been hit over the head with a brick
there's no need for talk
just get in the bed and ill make you bleed red
my hands are glowing like a dazzling white breeze
that hold the key to unlocking your virginity
peace

wow after reading this thing again i realized that its probably the shittiest poem ive ever written... why the hell am i even posting this

 

to prove 14 yr olds shouldn't do acid?

 

uh like no way

 

Acid is good for you.

Acid can make the talentless......

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*tada* equally talentless.

 

is that supposed to be an insult? cause if it is im honestly quite offended
you should see some of my other material

 

Relax, mate, I was just kidding.

Here, have a beer.

 

dont worry man i dont even write poems
in fact thats the first poem ive ever written, i dont actually have other material... when you get to know me you will see that almost everything i say is an inconsistency
usually i just blame it on the drugs

 

The poem was pretty weird i say

 

I think the poem is quite strange and puts some grusome images in to your head..but at the same time i think it displays an honest un-sugar coated view of a young males lust and sexual desire for a female ... in that instant he wrote it ...

 

The poem kicks ass!

 

cactus juice I'm from toronto as well! lets dance

 

lotusblossom! I didn't forget you, but how can i make out with ym monitor? I tried... *bows head in defeat*

 

wow! usually i only get to dance with girls who are completely inebriated
your pic is pretty hot by the way

 

Nah guys, Rafaela and me are gonna get it on crazy style, even though I don't even know her. But she's just that smokin and im just that charming.

 

not much stranger than the old man who lives in a tent in the playground near my house

 

You really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Suck

 

some chick don't sound much like a super chick if she don't like that yeah.

 

This is your brain on drugs: wtf.

 

yeah acid makes everything funny... it will make you laugh so hard that youll feel like youve been kicked in the face when you come down
people think weed makes things funny... lol

 

woah, brave sir rubin, thats harsh man! And happy leaves do make things pretty funny, you dont need chemicals for that.

P.S. The poem was kinda fucked up (in a good way though), but an insight to a mind on acid. Not bad!