"Chasing an Illusion"

i think about things a lot, probally too much,
i think that she could be right for me, i really do,
i feel like i love everything about her,
but maybe im just exaggerating her in my mind,
maybe she's really not as great as ive imagined her to be,
maybe im just chasing an illusion.

 

could someone give me some feedback on this poem, if you can really call it that, its more like themed thoughts, none the less, any feedback?

 

Yeah, it sounds more like prose. Theres no symbols or metaphors, just description.

 

Poem or not, I love it.
its exactly how i feel a lot.

 

i like this poem b/c it is complete and decisive and shows how introspective you are and that is a huge talent. congratulations!!!