Darkness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marcella312001, Feb 15, 2005.

  1. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    listen to me don't walk away, I have set here for hours with something to say.








    I know you won't like it but words must be out, I know you won't hear me​

    unless that I shout. my heart it is screaming with words left unsaid​

    and if you won't hear them it soon may be dead.​

    you once said that you loved me, and your words gave me flight.​

    You once showed that you loved me in the dark tender night.​

    our passion released me from years spent in doubt, and showed me ​

    that I was a woman worth dreaming about, But now I am lost in a ​

    world of choices and I cannot find my way.​

    I can no longer tell the diffrence in darkest night and brightest day.​

    I feel so cold and lonely in this darkness all alone,​

    I reach for your arms to hold me and all I find is stone.​

    I cannot see tomorrow through the haze of yesterday,​

    and the pain of choices taken are the poisons of today.​



    A new revisition to a old poem, added to it a bit.​
     
  2. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    damn thing did not copy a paist the way I wanted it too
     
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  4. deathmeup

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    i love it anyways...it spoke, like many other things tickle your inner soul
     

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